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expect; for, in the absence of any universal have been our verdict, had we not known who standard, the public are wont to weigh the ac- was the writer; and we feel a double disaptions, words, and writings of each man separ-pointment now when forced to record it ately, and to decide upon their merit according against a poet of such deserved reputato previous achievement. It may be a posi- tion. But it is the best course to express tive misfortune to have succeeded too early. our opinion honestly, and without reservation. There is much more in the word "Excelsior" My. Tennyson's indiscriminate admirers than meets the common eyes, or, we shrewdly may possibly think it their duty to represent apprehend than reaches the understanding of this, his latest production, as a magnificent the men who use it so freely. A man may triumph of genius, but they never will be able rise to fame by one sudden effort; but unless to persuade the public to adopt that view, and he can leap as high, if not higher, again, he we trust most sincerely that the Laureate will will presently be talked of as a cripple by not permit himself to be confirmed in practical multitudes, who, but for his first airy vault, error through their flatteries. We say this would have regarded his second with astonish- much because we see no reason for attributing ment. It is the consciousness of the universal the inferior quality of his later poems to any application of this rule of individual compari- decay of his native or acquired powers. We son which, in all ages, has forced poets and believe that he can, whenever he pleases, delight other literary men to study variety. Having the world once more with such poetry as he achieved decided success in one department, enunciated in his youth; but we think that he they doubt whether their second effort can has somehow or other been led astray by potranscend the first; and being unwilling to etic theories, which may be admirably adapted acknowledge discomfiture, even by themselves, for the consideration of dilettanti, but which they essay some new feat of intellectual gymnastics. That the world has been a gainer thereby we do not doubt. "New fields and new pastures" are as necessary to the poet as to the shepherd; only it behooves him to take care that he does not conduct us to a barren

moor.

are calculated rather to spoil than to enhance the productions of a man of real genius.— Theories have been ere now the curse of many poets. For example, who will deny that, but for their obstinate adherence to theory, the reputations both of Wordsworth and of Southey would have been greater than they presently are?

Now let us examine more particularly the poem before us. Had Maud been put into Maud is a monologue in six-and-twenty our hands as the work of some young unrecog-parts, each of them intended to depict a nized poet, we should have said that it exhib- peculiar phase of the mind of the speaker, ited very great promise-that it contained at who is a young gentleman in decayed cirleast one passage of such extraordinary rhyth- cumstances, and therefore morbid and misanmical music, that the sense became subordi- thropical. The poem opens thus:nate to the sound, a result which, except in

wood,

Its lips in the field above are dabbled with bloodred heath,

The

red-ribb'd ledges drip with a silent horror of blood,

And Echo there, whatever is ask'd her, answers 'Death.'

For there in the ghastly pit long since a body was found,

His who had given me life-O father! O God!

was it well?—

the case of one or two of the plaintive ancient "I hate the dreadful hollow behind the little Scottish ballads, and some of the lyrics of Burns, has hardly ever been attained by any British writer of poetry-that such passages, however, though they exhibited the remarkable powers of the author, were by no means to be considered as manifestations, or rather assurances, of his judgment, even in musical matters, since they alternated with others of positively hideous cacophony, such as we should have supposed no man gifted with a tolerable ear and pliable fingers would have perpetrated -that sometimes a questionable taste had been exhibited in the selection of ornaments, which were rather gaudy than graceful, and often too ostentatiously exposed-that there were other grave errors against taste which we could only attribute to want of practice and study that the objectionable and unartistic And portions of the poem were, leaving the mediocre ones altogether out of the question, grossly disproportionate to the good-and that the general effect of the poem was unhappy, unwholesome, and disagreeable. Such would

Mangled and flatten'd, and crush'd and dinted into the ground:

There yet lies the rock that fell with him when he fell.

Did he fling himself down? who knows? for a
ever he mutter'd and madden'd, and ever
great speculation had fail'd,
wann'd with despair,

And out he walk'd when the wind like a broken
worldling wail'd,

And the flying gold of the ruin'd woodlands drove thro' the air.

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Is that poetry? Is it even respectable verse? Is it not altogether an ill-conceived and worse-expressed screed of bombast, set to a metre which has the string-halt, without even the advantage of regularity in its hobble? Do not say that we are severe, we are merely speaking the truth, and we are ready to furnish a test. Let any man who can appreciate melody, turn to Locksley Hall, and read aloud

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eight or ten stanzas of that wonderful poem, but makes up his mind to have nothing to say until he has possessed himself with its music, to her :

then let him attempt to sound the passage

which we have just quoted, and he will imme-"Thanks, for the fiend best knows whether wodiately perceive the woeful difference. The

man or man be the worse.

contrast between the breathings of an Eolian I will bury myself in my books, and the Devil

harp and the rasping of a blacksmith's file is scarcely more palpable. Our young misanthrope goes on to describe the ways of the

may pipe to his own."

However, on an early day he obtains

a

world, of which he seems to entertain a very glimpse, in a carriage, of "a cold and clearbad opinion, and finally comes to the conclu- cut-face," which proves to belong to Maud, sion that war upon a large scale is the only and he thus describes her :

Faultily faultless, icily regular, splendidly null, Dead perfection, no more; nothing more, if it had not been

For a chance of travel, a paleness, an hour's defect of the rose,

Or an underlip you may call it a little too ripe, too full,

Or the least little delicate aquiline curve in a sensitive

nose,

From which I escaped heart-free, with the least little touch of spleen."

The thaw, however, commences. He presently hears her singing; and as this passage is the first in the volume which displays a scintillation of poetic power, or reminds us in any way of the former writings of Mr. Tennyson, we gladly insert it:—

"A voice by the cedar tree,
In the meadow under the Hall!

She is singing an air that is known to me,
A passionate ballad gallant and gay,
A martial song like a trumpet's call !
Singing alone in the morning of life,
In the happy morning of life and of May,
Singing of men that in battle array,
Ready in heart and ready in hand,
March with banner and bugle and fife
To the death for their native land.

Maud with her exquisite face,

And wild voice pealing up to the sunny sky, And feet like sunny gems on an English green, Maud in the light of her youth and her grace, Singing of Death, and of Honor that cannot die,

Till I well could weep for a time so sordid and mean,

And myself so languid and base.

Silence, beautiful voice!

Be still, for you only trouble the mind
With a joy in which I cannot rejoice,
A glory I shall not find.

Still I will hear you no more,

For your sweetness hardly leaves me a choice
But move to the meadow and fall before
Her feet on the meadow and grass, and a lore,
Not her, who is neither courtly nor kind,
Not her, not her, but a voice."

When we read the above passage we had good hope that the Laureate had emerged from the fog, but he again becomes indistinct and distorted. However, the worst is past, for we verily believe it would be impossible for ingenuity itself to caricature the commencement. Maud begins to smile upon Misanthropos, who is, however, still suspicious; for her brother has an eye to a seat for the county, and the young lady may be a canvasser in disguise. We should like to know what gentleman sate for the following sketch:—

"What if tho' her eye seem'd full Of a kind intent to me,

What if that dandy-despot, he,
That jewell'd mass of millinery,
That oil'd and curl'd Assyrian Bull
Smelling of musk and of insolence,
Her brother, from whom I keep aloof,
Who wants the finer politic sense
To mask, tho' but in his own behoof,
With a glassy smile his brutal scorn-
What if he had told her yestermorn
How prettily for his own sweet sake
A face of tenderness might be feign'd,
And a moist mirage in desert eyes,
That so, when the rotten hustings shake
In another month to his brazen lies,
A wretched vote may be gain'd."

It seems, however, that a young member of the peerage, who owes his rank to black diamonds, is an admirer of Maud; whereupon the misanthropic lover again becomes abusive:

"Sick, am I sick of a jealous dread?
Was not one of the two at her side
This new-made lord, whose splendor plucks
The slavish hat from the villager's head?
Whose old grandfather has lately died,
Gone to a blacker pit, for whom
Grimy nakedness dragging his trucks
And laying his trams in a poison'd gloom
Wrought till he crept from a gutted mine
Master of half a servile shire,

And left his coal all turn'd into gold
To a grandson, first of his noble line,
Rich in the grace ali women desire,
Strong in the power that all men adore,
And simper and set their voices lower,
And soften as if to a girl, and hold
Awe-stricken breaths at a work divine,
Seeing his gewgaw castle shine,
New as his title, built last year,
There amid perky larches and pine,
And over the sullen purple moor
(Look at it) pricking a cockney ear.

What, has he found my jewel out?
For one of the two that rode at her side
Bound for the Hall, I am sure was he:
Bound for the Hall, and I think for a bride.
Blithe would her brother's acceptance be.
Maud could be gracious too, no doubt,
To a lord, a captain, a padded shape,
A bought commission, a waxen face,
A rabbit mouth that is ever agape-
Bought? what is it he cannot buy?
And therefore splenetic, personal, base,
Sick, sick to the heart of life, am I."

But, after all, Misanthropos proves too much for the titled Lord of the Mines, for he and Maud have a walk together in a wood, and the courtship commences in earnest :

"Birds in our wood sang
Ringing through the valleys,
Maud is here, here, here
In among the lilies.

I kiss'd her slender hand,
She took the kiss sedately;

Maud is not seventeen,

But she is tall and stately.

Look, a horse at the door,

And little King Charles is snarling.
Go back, my lord, across the moor,
You are not her darling."

O dear, dear! what manner of stuff is

this ?

But that Assyrian Bull of a brother is again in the way, and treats Misanthropos cavaliely; notwithstanding which he proposes to Maud, and is accepted. We make every allowance for the raptures of a lover on such an occasion, and admit that he is privileged to talk very great nonsense; but there must be a limit somewhere; and we submit to Mr. Tennyson whether he was justified, for his own sake, in putting a passage so outrageously silly as the following into the mouth of his hero :—

"Go not, happy day,

From the shining fields,
Go not, happy day,

Till the maiden yields.
Rosy is the West,

Rosy is the South,
Roses are her cheeks,

And a rose her mouth.
When the happy Yes

Falters from her lips,
Pass and blush the news
O'er the blowing ships.

Over blowing seas,

Over seas at rest,
Pass the happy news,
Blush it thro' the West;
Till the red man dance
By his red cedar tree,
And the red man's babe
Leap, beyond the sea.
Blush from West to East,
Blush from East to West,
Till the West is East
Blush it thro' the West.
Rosy is the West,

Rosy is the South,

Roses are her cheeks,

And a rose her mouth."

It seems to us a splendid piece of versification, but deficient in melody and passion, and much too artificial for the situation. Others, however, may think differently, and therefore we extract the conclusion:

"Is that enchanted moan only the swell
Of the long waves that roll in yonder bay?
And hark the clock within, the silver knell
Of twelve sweet hours that past in bridal white,
And died to live, long as my pulses play;
But now by this my love has closed her sight,
And given false death her hand, and stol'n away
To dreamful wastes where footless fancies dwell
Among the fragments of the golden day.
May nothing there her maiden grace affright!
Dear heart, I feel with thee the drowsy spell.
My bride to be, my evermore delight,
My own heart's heart and ownest own, farewell.
It is but for a little space I go:
And ye meanwhile far over moor and fell
Beat to the noiseless music of the night!
Has our whole earth gone nearer to the glow
Of your soft splendors, that you look so bright ?
I have climb'd nearer out of lonely Hell.
Beat, happy stars, timing with things below,
Beat with my heart more blest than heart can
tell,

Blest, but for some dark undercurrent woe
That seems to draw-but it shall not be so:
Let all be well, be well."

Then follows some namby-pamby which we shall not quote. There is to be a grand political dinner and dance at the Hall, to which Misanthropos is not invited; but he intends to wait in Maud's own rose-garden until the ball is over, when he hopes to obtain an interview for a moment. Then comes a very remarkable passage, in which Mr. Tennyson gives a signal specimen of the rhythmical power which he possesses. The music of it is faultless;

and we at least are not disposed to cavil at the quaintness of the imagery which is almost Oriental in its tone. We treasure it the more, because it is the one gem of the collection— the only passage that we can read with pure unmixed delight, and with a perfect conviction that it is the strain of a true poet. Other passages there are, more ambitious and elaborate, studded all over with those metaphors, strange epithets, and conceits which are the disfigurement of modern poetry, and which we are surprised that a man of genius and experience should persist in using: but they all seem to us to want life and reality, and surely the ink was sluggish in the pen when they were written. Only in this one does the verse flash out like a golden thread from a reel; and we feel that our hands are bound, like those of Thalaba, when the enchantress sang to him as she

Mr. Halliwell some years ago published a
collection of Nursery Rhymes. We have not
the volume by us at present; but we are fully
satisfied that nothing so bairnly as the above is
to be found in the Breviary of the Innocents
The part which follows this is ambitiously and
elaborately written, and we doubt not will find spun:-
many admirers. It is eminently rhetorical.

and replete with graceful imagery, but some-"Come into the garden, Maud,
how there is not a line in it which haunts us. For the black bat, night, has flown,

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As the music clash'd in the hall;

And long by the garden lake I stood,
For I heard your rivulet fall

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Little more of story is there. The lovers are surprised in the garden by the Assyrian Bull and Lord Culm and Coke, and the former smites Misanthropos on the face. A duel ensues, when "procumbit humi bos." Misanthropos betakes himself to France, returns, finds that his love is dead, and goes mad. Tennyson has written a mad passage, but we must needs say that he had better have spared himself the trouble. Seven pages of what he most accurately calls "idiot gabble,” are rather too much, more especially when they do not contain a touch of pathos. We weep over the disordered wits of Ophelia-we listen to the ravings of Misanthropos, and are nervous as to what may happen if the keeper should not presently appear with a strait-jacket. The case is bad enough when young poetasters essay to gain a hearing by dint of maniacal howls; but it is far worse when we find a man of undoubted genius and wide-spread reputa

From the lake to the meadow and on to the tion, demeaning himself by putting his name

wood,

Our wood, that is dearer than all;

From the meadow your walks have left so sweet That whenever a March-wind sighs

He sets the jewel-print of your feet

In violets blue as your eyes,

To the woody hollows in which we meet,
And the valleys of Paradise.

The slender acacia would not shake
One long milk-bloom on the tree;

The white lake-blossoms fell into the lake,
As the pimpernel dozed on the lea;
But the rose was awake all night for your sake,
Knowing your promise to me;
The lilies and roses were all awake,
They sigh'd for the dawn and thee.

Queen rose of the rosebud garden of girls,
Come hither, the dances are done,
In gloss of satin and glimmer of pearls,
Queen lily and rose in one;

Shine out, little head, sunning over with curls,
To the flowers, and be their sun.

There has fallen a splendid tear,
From the passion-flower at the gate,

to such absolute nonsense as this:

"Not that gray old wolf, for he came not back From the wilderness full of wolves, where he used to lie;

He has gather'd the bones for his o'ergrown whelp to crack;

Crack them now for yourself, and howl, and die.

Prophet, curse me the blabbing lip,

And curse me the British vermin, the rat;

I know not whether he came in the Hanover

ship,

But I know that he lies and listens mute
In an ancient mansion's crannies and holes:
Arsenic, arsenic, sir, would do it,

Except that now we poison our babes, poor souls!

It is all used up for that."

Can Mr. Tennyson possibly be laboring under the delusion that he is using his high talents well and wisely, and giving a valuable contribution to the poetic literature of England, by composing and publishing such gib berish? We are told that there is method in madness, and Shakspeare never lost sight of that when giving voice to the ravings of King

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